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Thanks, Helen! Perfect punctuation! I think I could easily eliminate all commas and go totally enjambed but I'm really not sure where I want to go with this besides a total rewrite. (Which, of course, it needs. It's a first draft.) I really hate this poem.
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And now Harry, let us step into the night and pursue that flighty temptress, adventure! - Albus Dumbledore
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