Thread: Help me edit this poem please
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Old 02-11-2008, 10:11 AM   #5
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Originally Posted by tracilicious View Post
I really hate this poem.
See and I like it, especially the juxtaposition of the ending of life and the sexual act/potential beginning of life.

My suggestions are just suggestions. I'm thinking other LoTers should have a go, too.
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