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Originally Posted by Cadaverous Pallor
Hmm, interesting. I didn't intend sadness. What specifically made it seem sad?
Anyone else want to say how it made them feel?
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Very well written. (And motivating for me to continue with my story.
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It made me think of...well, me. Not in a sad way, though. (Although, I let out a sigh at the mention of Rod because he hasn't been at the park lately.)
Aside from that, it was very...calming. (If that description works.)