Pneumatic Lung: a collection of haiku

tracilicious · 01-11-2005, 05:57 PM

oh pneumatic lung
racking my body with hacking
collapse into coughs

hacking spewing cough
don't look at me please, i'm gross
will it ever end?

walking pneumonia
isn't so bad. turns me to
quivering jello

well meaning fam'ly
says go to doctor right now please
hell no we won't go

yeah vitamin c
puts life in me - lets me last
'nother day alive

two babes sap my strength
when oh when will i get well?
it's been six weeks now

I'm really not too sick
just run down and quite whiny
vent here saves Michael

self restoration
fluid leaves lungs as I heal
mind wraps lungs in health

LSPoorEeyorick · 01-11-2005, 07:13 PM

praise the heavens, lo
for it is haiku haven
here in our new home

speaking of which, did
you ever notice Rowling
likes to use her H?

Hippogryph, Hannah
Hufflepuff, Hermione
Harry and Hagrid

tracilicious · 01-12-2005, 12:25 AM

oh haiku haiku
haiku haiku haiku you!
do you haiku too?

01-11-2005, 05:57 PM	#1
tracilicious avatar transition Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: in-between Posts: 2,487	Pneumatic Lung: a collection of haiku oh pneumatic lung racking my body with hacking collapse into coughs hacking spewing cough don't look at me please, i'm gross will it ever end? walking pneumonia isn't so bad. turns me to quivering jello well meaning fam'ly says go to doctor right now please hell no we won't go yeah vitamin c puts life in me - lets me last 'nother day alive two babes sap my strength when oh when will i get well? it's been six weeks now I'm really not too sick just run down and quite whiny vent here saves Michael self restoration fluid leaves lungs as I heal mind wraps lungs in health
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LSPoorEeyorick scribblin' Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: in the moment Posts: 3,872	praise the heavens, lo for it is haiku haven here in our new home speaking of which, did you ever notice Rowling likes to use her H? Hippogryph, Hannah Hufflepuff, Hermione Harry and Hagrid
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