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FEJ · 05-10-2005, 11:38 AM

Self-inflicted misery
served open face for all to see
it wasn't me that volunteered to be a victim for free
so don't pass the blame to me.

this is a work in progress. I didn't want the verse to get lost in my head.

Eliza Hodgkins 1812 · 05-10-2005, 11:40 AM

Poem or song? It sounds like it could be either, which is meant as a compliment. I especially like "served open face for all to see".

Ghoulish Delight · 05-10-2005, 11:42 AM

(Hey, we can't hear you. Try stepping up to the Open Mic with these).

I like the pieces, though.

FEJ · 05-10-2005, 12:24 PM

my bad....was trying to post between stops...should be in correct forum now...thanks N/A

05-10-2005, 11:38 AM	#1
FEJ Living Now Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 563	Volunteer Self-inflicted misery served open face for all to see it wasn't me that volunteered to be a victim for free so don't pass the blame to me. this is a work in progress. I didn't want the verse to get lost in my head.
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05-10-2005, 11:40 AM	#2
Eliza Hodgkins 1812 Sputnik Sweetheart Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Long Beach Posts: 2,685	Poem or song? It sounds like it could be either, which is meant as a compliment. I especially like "served open face for all to see".
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05-10-2005, 11:42 AM	#3
Ghoulish Delight I Floop the Pig Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Alternative Swankstyle Posts: 19,348	(Hey, we can't hear you. Try stepping up to the Open Mic with these). I like the pieces, though. __________________ 'He who receives an idea from me, receives instruction himself without lessening mine; as he who lights his taper at mine, receives light without darkening me.' -TJ
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05-10-2005, 12:24 PM	#4
FEJ Living Now Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 563	my bad....was trying to post between stops...should be in correct forum now...thanks N/A
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