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Disneyphile · 12-12-2007, 12:30 AM

Awesome feedback, Tom (& LSPE too)!

Sadly, that car show is the only footage that we have so far. The original full pitch with voiceovers, variety, et al, was extremely low-res, and I can't even use any of it. (Beside it being copyrighted by the original production company.) But, we have more shoots scheduled soon, and then I'll be making a new full pitch reel for him. Until then, this was made to supplement the original pitch reel, mainly to tie me to the show for an impromptu investor meeting a couple weeks ago.

I see what you mean about the dissolves, and some of the clips do seem to drag more than others. I'm definitely noting that for the full reel. I see what you mean about the text too - it's really hard to read online. On a bigger screen, it's much more clear. But, the angle can throw it off a bit.

Thanks SO much for taking the time to watch and review.

This was my little rush project that I had about 10 hours to digitize and complete all the way to the DVD packaging. At least with the full reel, I'll have a bit more notice, and I can rummage through my feedback notes.

Snowflake · 12-12-2007, 08:23 AM

I can't watch til I get home from the office. Drat it!

wolfy999 · 12-12-2007, 09:21 AM

Puter says I don't have the complete Quick Time to view this and not available! Drat...really wanted to see this!

BarTopDancer · 12-12-2007, 09:21 AM

Great video! I would second LSPE and Tom and clarify the concept a bit more through voice-over. I wasn't sure what was going on, and by the end of the trailer I forgot it was for Motorheads. I love the music and the notes fit with the transition.

Cadaverous Pallor · 12-12-2007, 10:58 AM

Some lovely shots in there!

I'd add to the comments above that since this is supposed to be indicative of only one episode of many different types, perhaps it could be shortened. Seemed to run a little long to me. The long transitions and long shots made me feel that this show is supposed to be for the older generation. Is that the market you're going for? Most gearhead shows that I've seen recently on Spike and the like have quick cuts. The feel that you're projecting here is much more leisurely and old school - it brings to mind Huell Howser's style.

What sticks in my head is that in the last shot you have of the host, he didn't seem too enthused, and I found that to be a weak ending.

Disneyphile · 12-12-2007, 11:40 AM

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Puter says I don't have the complete Quick Time to view this and not available! Drat...really wanted to see this!

Download the latest version directly from Apple. That's what Ken had to do, and he was able to view it on his computer which is over 5 years old.

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The feel that you're projecting here is much more leisurely and old school - it brings to mind Huell Howser's style.

Yep - the show is written to be a little more laid back, set for the 25+ crowd. The full show does have a segment in there involving "hot girls with hot cars" which will appeal to the younger of that demographic.

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What sticks in my head is that in the last shot you have of the host, he didn't seem too enthused, and I found that to be a weak ending.

The lovely host/producer definitely is a tad rusty (he'll admit it too). That was his first time coming back to improvisational hosting after a nearly 2-year hiatus since the full pitch reel was made. So, we're still dusting off his chops. But, I'll let him know that others notice it too, not just me.

Capt Jack · 12-12-2007, 11:48 AM

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That reminds me - I need to check on that legal street race coming up this weekend in San Diego.

yup...friday night. the new schedule isnt out yet but should be soon.
I'll be there. havent decided if Im driving or no.

Disneyphile · 12-12-2007, 11:51 AM

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yup...friday night. the new schedule isnt out yet but should be soon.
I'll be there. havent decided if Im driving or no.

Is it on Saturday too? If it's only on Friday, then it's up to the producer whether or not we'll be there, since he still has a day job.

Also, if you're driving, mind if I ride along for some great POV shots?

Oh, and you MUST be one of our interviews too.

Capt Jack · 12-12-2007, 12:26 PM

just friday night. 6:30pm start racing till midnight or so

dress warm :P

Not Afraid · 12-12-2007, 03:55 PM

I watched it. I'm not sure I have any valid comments. I've almost completely had my TV virginity restored. But, I didn't "get" what the show is about. My first impression was sort of a Huel Howser sort of thing, but by the end, I was confused. (Not hard to do with me.) I also REALLY wanted to hear what the person faintly said about "million dollars" in the background during the shot of the white car with "23" painted on it.. So much so, that it completely distracted me from the next 20 seconds or so of the commercial.

Also, the end where he "intros" the show again seems like it is a starting intro and not a conclusion.

I love your logo but I almost missed it because there was so much time given to the ending credits.

OK. Uneducated comments there. Take them or leave them.

12-12-2007, 12:30 AM	#11
Disneyphile SQUIRREL! Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: On the curbside. Posts: 5,098	Awesome feedback, Tom (& LSPE too)! Sadly, that car show is the only footage that we have so far. The original full pitch with voiceovers, variety, et al, was extremely low-res, and I can't even use any of it. (Beside it being copyrighted by the original production company.) But, we have more shoots scheduled soon, and then I'll be making a new full pitch reel for him. Until then, this was made to supplement the original pitch reel, mainly to tie me to the show for an impromptu investor meeting a couple weeks ago. I see what you mean about the dissolves, and some of the clips do seem to drag more than others. I'm definitely noting that for the full reel. I see what you mean about the text too - it's really hard to read online. On a bigger screen, it's much more clear. But, the angle can throw it off a bit. Thanks SO much for taking the time to watch and review. This was my little rush project that I had about 10 hours to digitize and complete all the way to the DVD packaging. At least with the full reel, I'll have a bit more notice, and I can rummage through my feedback notes.
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12-12-2007, 08:23 AM	#12
Snowflake lost in the fog Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: San Francisco Posts: 7,831	I can't watch til I get home from the office. Drat it! __________________ Be yourself; everyone else is already taken. - Oscar Wilde
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12-12-2007, 09:21 AM	#13
wolfy999 Eyes like Sapphires! Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: 2.4 miles from Disneyland Posts: 1,523	Puter says I don't have the complete Quick Time to view this and not available! Drat...really wanted to see this! __________________ Diane "Honesty may be the best policy, but it's important to remember that apparently, by elimination, dishonesty is the second-best policy." - George Carlin 1937-2008 DISNEY IS FINALLY PAYING ME BACK......STILL OWES ME ABOUT (oh, wait....way too much)!
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12-12-2007, 09:21 AM	#14
BarTopDancer Prepping... Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Here, there, everywhere Posts: 11,405	Great video! I would second LSPE and Tom and clarify the concept a bit more through voice-over. I wasn't sure what was going on, and by the end of the trailer I forgot it was for Motorheads. I love the music and the notes fit with the transition. __________________ Spork is the new MacGyver Postcards From My Edge
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12-12-2007, 10:58 AM	#15
Cadaverous Pallor ohhhh baby Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Parental Bliss Posts: 12,364	Some lovely shots in there! I'd add to the comments above that since this is supposed to be indicative of only one episode of many different types, perhaps it could be shortened. Seemed to run a little long to me. The long transitions and long shots made me feel that this show is supposed to be for the older generation. Is that the market you're going for? Most gearhead shows that I've seen recently on Spike and the like have quick cuts. The feel that you're projecting here is much more leisurely and old school - it brings to mind Huell Howser's style. What sticks in my head is that in the last shot you have of the host, he didn't seem too enthused, and I found that to be a weak ending. __________________ The second star to the right shines in the night for you
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12-12-2007, 12:26 PM	#19
Capt Jack check your head Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 4,174	just friday night. 6:30pm start racing till midnight or so dress warm :P __________________ a clear conscience is a sure sign of a fuzzy memory
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12-12-2007, 03:55 PM	#20
Not Afraid HI! Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 17,108	I watched it. I'm not sure I have any valid comments. I've almost completely had my TV virginity restored. But, I didn't "get" what the show is about. My first impression was sort of a Huel Howser sort of thing, but by the end, I was confused. (Not hard to do with me.) I also REALLY wanted to hear what the person faintly said about "million dollars" in the background during the shot of the white car with "23" painted on it.. So much so, that it completely distracted me from the next 20 seconds or so of the commercial. Also, the end where he "intros" the show again seems like it is a starting intro and not a conclusion. I love your logo but I almost missed it because there was so much time given to the ending credits. OK. Uneducated comments there. Take them or leave them.
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