Dove Contest - Take 1 (Need Feedback ASAP!!) - Page 7

wolfy999 · 01-03-2008, 06:19 PM

I still prefer the fog in the shower (even if it is a bit too thick).....the consumer needs to focus on the product, not the woman.

Other than that Take 3 makes more sense.

Deebs · 01-03-2008, 06:22 PM

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Originally Posted by wolfy999

I still prefer the fog in the shower (even if it is a bit too thick).....the consumer needs to focus on the product, not the woman.

I agree about the focus being on the product. I don't even think the fog is too much in Take 2.

Did I say I really like the squeaky shower faucet at the beginning? Well, I do.

Kevy Baby · 01-03-2008, 06:23 PM

OK. Very different perspective with the sound on.

Initial viewing seems okay. Would like a little more fog on the mirror (but I still like the old shot better).

I'll have to watch again in a few minutes.

NirvanaMan · 01-03-2008, 06:28 PM

Camera shakes a bit in the last shot. Other than that I think it is looking good.

Disneyphile · 01-03-2008, 06:32 PM

Ok, how about the line, "Enjoy a little luxury, everyday" as a solitary spoken line at the end?

Would it be best to speak them over the words, or remove that shot and just say it over the shower/tray scene (and lengthen that a couple seconds to compensate)?

Oh, and who has a good voice around here, a microphone, and a way to record a file and email it to me?

(I know you people who have Skype can possibly manage!)

Kevy Baby · 01-03-2008, 06:32 PM

FWIW, I asked a friend of mine with a LOT of design experience and he agrees that take two is the better mirror shot

NirvanaMan · 01-03-2008, 06:39 PM

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Originally Posted by Kevy Baby

FWIW, I asked a friend of mine with a LOT of design experience and he agrees that take two is the better mirror shot

I think I have to agree now, but that could be cause I am getting too close to it. A little less fogging would be ideal, but given the choices of shots up there I think 2 is the way to go for that shot. Plus there wasn't noticeable camera shake.

NirvanaMan · 01-03-2008, 06:37 PM

What might be an interesting experiment is to leave just the sound effects (which work great) and take out the music all together, with a seductively toned VO at the end over the hero shot.

Disneyphile · 01-03-2008, 06:53 PM

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Originally Posted by NirvanaMan

What might be an interesting experiment is to leave just the sound effects (which work great) and take out the music all together, with a seductively toned VO at the end over the hero shot.

Ok, I'll do two VO versions - one with music and one without. (And, I'll switch it back to the 2nd shower/mirror scene too).

Um, gals... I need help with this one - can any of you please record for me?

The line: "Enjoy a little luxury, everyday."

Say it however you want, and you can just keep recording even if you screw up or want to change styles/tones - just give me about 3 seconds between each one for cuts. I sound way too nasal with my sinus issues, so I'm really loathe to do it myself. .wav or .mp3 format is fine.

My email is disneyphile@gmail.com.

Don't make me beg.

Ponine · 01-03-2008, 08:03 PM

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Originally Posted by Disneyphile

Um, gals... I need help with this one - can any of you please record for me?

The line: "Enjoy a little luxury, everyday."

I can help of I had an idea of WHAT to record with...
If you already have one, go with it.

01-03-2008, 06:19 PM	#1
wolfy999 Eyes like Sapphires! Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: 2.4 miles from Disneyland Posts: 1,523	I still prefer the fog in the shower (even if it is a bit too thick).....the consumer needs to focus on the product, not the woman. Other than that Take 3 makes more sense. __________________ Diane "Honesty may be the best policy, but it's important to remember that apparently, by elimination, dishonesty is the second-best policy." - George Carlin 1937-2008 DISNEY IS FINALLY PAYING ME BACK......STILL OWES ME ABOUT (oh, wait....way too much)!
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01-03-2008, 06:23 PM	#3
Kevy Baby Chowder Head Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Yes Posts: 18,500	OK. Very different perspective with the sound on. Initial viewing seems okay. Would like a little more fog on the mirror (but I still like the old shot better). I'll have to watch again in a few minutes. __________________ The thing about quotes on the internet is that you cannot verify their validity. - Abraham Lincoln
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01-03-2008, 06:28 PM	#4
NirvanaMan Making Change Happen Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 990	Camera shakes a bit in the last shot. Other than that I think it is looking good.
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Disneyphile SQUIRREL! Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: On the curbside. Posts: 5,098	Ok, how about the line, "Enjoy a little luxury, everyday" as a solitary spoken line at the end? Would it be best to speak them over the words, or remove that shot and just say it over the shower/tray scene (and lengthen that a couple seconds to compensate)? Oh, and who has a good voice around here, a microphone, and a way to record a file and email it to me? (I know you people who have Skype can possibly manage!)
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01-03-2008, 06:32 PM	#6
Kevy Baby Chowder Head Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Yes Posts: 18,500	FWIW, I asked a friend of mine with a LOT of design experience and he agrees that take two is the better mirror shot __________________ The thing about quotes on the internet is that you cannot verify their validity. - Abraham Lincoln
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01-03-2008, 06:37 PM	#8
NirvanaMan Making Change Happen Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 990	What might be an interesting experiment is to leave just the sound effects (which work great) and take out the music all together, with a seductively toned VO at the end over the hero shot.
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