Dove Contest - Take 1 (Need Feedback ASAP!!)

[Disneyphile]

Originally Posted by NirvanaMan

Or that old dude from the diabetes commercials that can't say diabetes.

OMG. Wilford Brimley would be too damned funny. This totally seductive shower scene and then Wilford's voice coming in at the end. Bwahahaha!!

Originally Posted by BarTopDancer

If you guys don't mind I can show it to a few marketing peoples in my office tomorrow for a fresh perspective.

Go for it! My plans are to finalize it tomorrow and upload it in the evening.

I have fixed the bottle suckage, and switched back to the second steamy shower.

I'm also toying with their stock music right now. It's SO overplayed from all the entries, but it is theirs....

(Thanks to everyone for all your insight and patience. I feel so, "Mom!! Look at me, Mom!! Look at this! Look at this!", which I know can be quite annoying. )