Help me edit this poem please - Lounge of Tomorrow

02-11-2008, 10:11 AM

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Originally Posted by tracilicious

I really hate this poem.

See and I like it, especially the juxtaposition of the ending of life and the sexual act/potential beginning of life.

My suggestions are just suggestions. I'm thinking other LoTers should have a go, too.

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