poetry of Capt Jack - Page 4

Capt Jack · 04-18-2006, 07:09 PM

the dust in my mouth
has a bittersweet taste
face down in it
since the last moment I saw sunlight

we'd become old friends
the dust and I
but the time has come
for us to part company

a sucker punch I saw coming a mile away
lay me here seems nearly a hundred days past
bruised and bloodied, unconscious and unbelieving
it was a damn good fight

tooth and nail, toe to toe
eye to eye and heart to heart
we fought with all we had
to no avail

lost was the battle and thusly the war
waged by our own doing but not by our wish
there are no winners
only survivors

left now to pick themselves up
brush the sacred dust from their hands
look hard into the sun rising on a new day
and see what new fights lay in our path

bring it

Gemini Cricket · 04-18-2006, 07:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Capt Jack

lost was the battle and thusly the war
waged by our own doing but not by our wish
there are no winners
only survivors

I like this bit. Very cool, Capt Jack!

Snowflake · 04-18-2006, 07:53 PM

THANK YOU Capt. dear Capt!

Is this an ask and ye shall receive?

I love your poetry, I do! The latest missive is no exception. I can't MOJO you for it, but in spirit!

Snowflake

Capt Jack · 04-19-2006, 08:12 AM

that it was my friend. glad you enjoyed it. it was more a 'write it down, worry about prose later' sorta thing....

there'll be more. trust me...Im just full of it.

Snowflake · 04-19-2006, 08:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Capt Jack

that it was my friend. glad you enjoyed it. it was more a 'write it down, worry about prose later' sorta thing....

there'll be more. trust me...Im just full of it.

Better to be full of this, than full of that

Thanks again, my friend!

Capt Jack · 06-27-2006, 11:59 PM

a lack of inspiration

the effervescent verse will not come this day
struggle as I might to find cause to bring them forth
wit and wisdom, mirth and tempo
lost now in the tempest of my mind and heart
no visions of a coming day call
no thought of the timeless sea ring
no meanings suffer unknown
no thought yearning to be free from the confines of my mind
shall find their way through me to these pages

perhaps again one day

wendybeth · 06-28-2006, 12:03 AM

I look forward to the day that your effervesence is restored, Captain, but even your sad verse is awesome.

Motorboat Cruiser · 06-28-2006, 01:03 AM

Man, how did I miss this thread. Wow.

Capt Jack · 07-18-2006, 08:57 AM

happy anniversary baby
got you on my mind.

I miss you.

Capt Jack · 11-22-2006, 11:19 AM

replay, regret, resign, repent

rethink

reawaken

return, regain, regroup, restart
replenish, revamp, rebuild, resolve

remember

04-18-2006, 07:09 PM	#31
Capt Jack check your head Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 4,174	the dust in my mouth has a bittersweet taste face down in it since the last moment I saw sunlight we'd become old friends the dust and I but the time has come for us to part company a sucker punch I saw coming a mile away lay me here seems nearly a hundred days past bruised and bloodied, unconscious and unbelieving it was a damn good fight tooth and nail, toe to toe eye to eye and heart to heart we fought with all we had to no avail lost was the battle and thusly the war waged by our own doing but not by our wish there are no winners only survivors left now to pick themselves up brush the sacred dust from their hands look hard into the sun rising on a new day and see what new fights lay in our path bring it __________________ a clear conscience is a sure sign of a fuzzy memory
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04-18-2006, 07:53 PM	#33
Snowflake lost in the fog Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: San Francisco Posts: 7,831	THANK YOU Capt. dear Capt! Is this an ask and ye shall receive? I love your poetry, I do! The latest missive is no exception. I can't MOJO you for it, but in spirit! Snowflake
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04-19-2006, 08:12 AM	#34
Capt Jack check your head Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 4,174	that it was my friend. glad you enjoyed it. it was more a 'write it down, worry about prose later' sorta thing.... there'll be more. trust me...Im just full of it. __________________ a clear conscience is a sure sign of a fuzzy memory
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06-27-2006, 11:59 PM	#36
Capt Jack check your head Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 4,174	a lack of inspiration the effervescent verse will not come this day struggle as I might to find cause to bring them forth wit and wisdom, mirth and tempo lost now in the tempest of my mind and heart no visions of a coming day call no thought of the timeless sea ring no meanings suffer unknown no thought yearning to be free from the confines of my mind shall find their way through me to these pages perhaps again one day __________________ a clear conscience is a sure sign of a fuzzy memory
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06-28-2006, 12:03 AM	#37
wendybeth Nevermind Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 7,847	I look forward to the day that your effervesence is restored, Captain, but even your sad verse is awesome. __________________
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06-28-2006, 01:03 AM	#38
Motorboat Cruiser Cruiser of Motorboats Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: So Cal Posts: 3,665	Man, how did I miss this thread. Wow.
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07-18-2006, 08:57 AM	#39
Capt Jack check your head Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 4,174	happy anniversary baby got you on my mind. I miss you. __________________ a clear conscience is a sure sign of a fuzzy memory
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11-22-2006, 11:19 AM	#40
Capt Jack check your head Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 4,174	replay, regret, resign, repent rethink reawaken return, regain, regroup, restart replenish, revamp, rebuild, resolve remember __________________ a clear conscience is a sure sign of a fuzzy memory
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