Dove Contest - Take 1 (Need Feedback ASAP!!)

[Disneyphile]

Ok, kids, here's the first cut for the contest. Lemme know what you think. Please say whatever comes to mind.

I can say one thing - trying to convey a message in 30 seconds or less is friggin hard, especially when certain stock footage must be used according to the rules.

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I still have a couple days left to tweak it, so please note any changes that should be made, etc.

This was truly a LoT of effort - NA's bathroom, CP's brave acting, and MBC's original music.

Enjoy!