Stanley's Heart

[Motorboat Cruiser]

Originally Posted by 3894

I don't love the story.

And to be honest, I'm not sure how I feel about it either. I wrote it simply to write, something I'm trying to do as much as possible these days. And when I find something that I don't consider absolutely awful (which is somewhat rare), I like to share it in the hopes that I'll get some feedback. This certainly didn't disappoint in that respect, and I appreciate the comments, both good and bad. If I didn't want any criticism, I wouldn't have posted it.

Without going into too much detail about why I wrote what I did, I will comment that I don't happen to find suicide all that romantic either, and have pretty strong feelings against it. The character in the story, however, saw things differently.