Dove Contest - Take 1 (Need Feedback ASAP!!) - Page 2

Morrigoon · 01-03-2008, 10:40 AM

DAMN! I like it!

I agree that you could afford to cut a few frames from the applying-Dove-to-loofah shot - there's that little pause before it starts to come out that makes it a tad long, but not horribly so. Personally, I think the music is great. And I agree with the love of the mirror shot.

Alex · 01-03-2008, 11:11 AM

Well, if there's anything I'm likely to be wrong about it is music. So definitely don't my opinion any particular weight in that regard.

alphabassettgrrl · 01-03-2008, 11:27 AM

Doesn't play. ::sniffle:: Not sure what I'm doing wrong. pout.

wolfy999 · 01-03-2008, 12:08 PM

I had to update my Quicktime to play....

Not Afraid · 01-03-2008, 12:10 PM

It's hard to be objective. Good friend shooting, good friend starting, good friend composting, my newly re-done bathroom (and even my photography is featured).........But here goes anyways. The uncomfortable moment is waiting for the soap to come out of the bottle. It just takes a bit too long. I agree that you don't know what Jen is "looking at" in the end shot. ("Man, I need to shave my pubes" comes to mind.

). I love the pacing of the music, it works perfectly. I think that it could be a bit "prettier" to fit the product.

I love the concept of the reflection shot!!!! Love Jen's expression of disgust and I love the soap dropping.

So, there's my very un-objective $.02.

Kevy Baby · 01-03-2008, 12:36 PM

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Originally Posted by Not Afraid

...and I love the soap dropping.

Kudos to Frodo Potter for his excellent soap dropping skills; a talent I understand he studied in depth with iSm.

Cadaverous Pallor · 01-03-2008, 12:46 PM

And yes, that really is NA's soap that I can't stand the sight of.

Not Afraid · 01-03-2008, 12:49 PM

A brand of soap that I heavily favor over any Dove body wash, BTW.

Cadaverous Pallor · 01-03-2008, 12:56 PM

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Originally Posted by Not Afraid

A brand of soap that I heavily favor over any Dove body wash, BTW.

Sorry about the soap dents! I must've dropped it at least a dozen times, plus whatever damage Mr Potter inflicted.

Not Afraid · 01-03-2008, 12:57 PM

It's fine. It still works.

01-03-2008, 10:40 AM	#11
Morrigoon I throw stones at houses Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Location: Location Posts: 9,534	DAMN! I like it! I agree that you could afford to cut a few frames from the applying-Dove-to-loofah shot - there's that little pause before it starts to come out that makes it a tad long, but not horribly so. Personally, I think the music is great. And I agree with the love of the mirror shot. __________________ http://bash.org/?top "It is useless for sheep to pass a resolution in favor of vegetarianism while wolves remain of a different opinion." -- William Randolph Inge
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01-03-2008, 11:11 AM	#12
Alex . Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 13,354	Well, if there's anything I'm likely to be wrong about it is music. So definitely don't my opinion any particular weight in that regard.
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01-03-2008, 11:27 AM	#13
alphabassettgrrl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 4,978	Doesn't play. ::sniffle:: Not sure what I'm doing wrong. pout. __________________ Why cycling? Anything [sport] that had to do with a ball, I wasn't very good at. -Lance Armstrong
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01-03-2008, 12:08 PM	#14
wolfy999 Eyes like Sapphires! Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: 2.4 miles from Disneyland Posts: 1,523	I had to update my Quicktime to play.... __________________ Diane "Honesty may be the best policy, but it's important to remember that apparently, by elimination, dishonesty is the second-best policy." - George Carlin 1937-2008 DISNEY IS FINALLY PAYING ME BACK......STILL OWES ME ABOUT (oh, wait....way too much)!
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01-03-2008, 12:10 PM	#15
Not Afraid HI! Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 17,108	It's hard to be objective. Good friend shooting, good friend starting, good friend composting, my newly re-done bathroom (and even my photography is featured).........But here goes anyways. The uncomfortable moment is waiting for the soap to come out of the bottle. It just takes a bit too long. I agree that you don't know what Jen is "looking at" in the end shot. ("Man, I need to shave my pubes" comes to mind. ). I love the pacing of the music, it works perfectly. I think that it could be a bit "prettier" to fit the product. I love the concept of the reflection shot!!!! Love Jen's expression of disgust and I love the soap dropping. So, there's my very un-objective $.02.
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01-03-2008, 12:46 PM	#17
Cadaverous Pallor ohhhh baby Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Parental Bliss Posts: 12,364	And yes, that really is NA's soap that I can't stand the sight of. __________________ The second star to the right shines in the night for you
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01-03-2008, 12:49 PM	#18
Not Afraid HI! Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 17,108	A brand of soap that I heavily favor over any Dove body wash, BTW.
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01-03-2008, 12:57 PM	#20
Not Afraid HI! Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 17,108	It's fine. It still works.
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