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I really really liked the mirror reflection scene at the end. I thought it looked very cool. Sensual without being over the top.
You are incredible. I can't believe you pulled this together so quickly. Some constructive criticism before I put on my "I work in marketing hat":
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Ok, here's Take 2.
I don't personally like the European music, but I'd love to hear if you all like it. I think the other one works better for the scene, but whatever. ![]() Now, I'll start on Take 3, starting with NM's marketing notes. ![]() (It's a good thing Ken just brought me some lunch during his lunch break...) |
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Hmm, is the mirror fog digital? Good idea, but too foggy, I almost didn't notice the mirror at all.
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I agree with GD that the mirror is too foggy, but the effect is great. Just needs to be toned down a touch. (of course that is prolly cause we both like looking at naked chix in mirrors)
I can't say I like the new music as much, but I think it does fit the scene better. I think it needs to be taken down a couple notches and brought in a bit more slowly - elegantly. It's a bit sudden. Looking good! |
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I like how you tied it in better to their "A little luxury, everyday?" slogan, but overall I preferred your first take.
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Oh, and one other difference to note between the takes, just after the soap drop:
"throw away the ordinary and indulge." (Take 1) "drop the ordinary and indulge." (Take 2) Which do you think sounds better? |
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