Dove Contest - Take 1 (Need Feedback ASAP!!)

wolfy999 · 01-03-2008, 06:19 PM

I still prefer the fog in the shower (even if it is a bit too thick).....the consumer needs to focus on the product, not the woman.

Other than that Take 3 makes more sense.

Deebs · 01-03-2008, 06:22 PM

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Originally Posted by wolfy999

I still prefer the fog in the shower (even if it is a bit too thick).....the consumer needs to focus on the product, not the woman.

I agree about the focus being on the product. I don't even think the fog is too much in Take 2.

Did I say I really like the squeaky shower faucet at the beginning? Well, I do.

01-03-2008, 06:19 PM	#1
wolfy999 Eyes like Sapphires! Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: 2.4 miles from Disneyland Posts: 1,523	I still prefer the fog in the shower (even if it is a bit too thick).....the consumer needs to focus on the product, not the woman. Other than that Take 3 makes more sense. __________________ Diane "Honesty may be the best policy, but it's important to remember that apparently, by elimination, dishonesty is the second-best policy." - George Carlin 1937-2008 DISNEY IS FINALLY PAYING ME BACK......STILL OWES ME ABOUT (oh, wait....way too much)!
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