im back

aerobrea · 04-21-2008, 10:07 PM

hmmm ok i wasnt sure which one to announce my comeback in and open mic sounded good nuff lol. ill work on that haiku..... i used to be good at that.............

thinking........

oh and ill put that hat back on if i can find it....

aerobrea · 04-21-2008, 10:15 PM

how that picture?? lol

ok heres my poem ( sorry if its lame but im trying

)

adventures: some good some bad
found love, lost it didnt even know
looking forward to the future

not sure if theres sposed to be punctuation in it or not.

whatcha think?

wendybeth · 04-21-2008, 10:37 PM

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Originally Posted by aerobrea

how that picture?? lol

ok heres my poem ( sorry if its lame but im trying

)

adventures: some good some bad
found love, lost it didnt even know
looking forward to the future

not sure if theres sposed to be punctuation in it or not.

whatcha think?

Great short poem, but as a haiku it would probably drive CP over the edge.

Welcome back!

aerobrea · 04-21-2008, 11:30 PM

thanks

04-21-2008, 10:07 PM	#1
aerobrea Born with a Sugarhigh Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: I live in Minnesota, bout 5 minutes from Wisconsin and 20 minutes from dwntwn St. Paul. Posts: 29	hmmm ok i wasnt sure which one to announce my comeback in and open mic sounded good nuff lol. ill work on that haiku..... i used to be good at that............. thinking........ oh and ill put that hat back on if i can find it.... __________________ "of all things i've lost, i miss my mind the most"
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04-21-2008, 10:15 PM	#2
aerobrea Born with a Sugarhigh Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: I live in Minnesota, bout 5 minutes from Wisconsin and 20 minutes from dwntwn St. Paul. Posts: 29	how that picture?? lol ok heres my poem ( sorry if its lame but im trying ) adventures: some good some bad found love, lost it didnt even know looking forward to the future not sure if theres sposed to be punctuation in it or not. whatcha think? __________________ "of all things i've lost, i miss my mind the most"
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04-21-2008, 11:30 PM	#4
aerobrea Born with a Sugarhigh Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: I live in Minnesota, bout 5 minutes from Wisconsin and 20 minutes from dwntwn St. Paul. Posts: 29	thanks __________________ "of all things i've lost, i miss my mind the most"
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