Need your creative help!!

[Eliza Hodgkins 1812]

Were you ever in Manhattan
Where the ladies in fur and satin
Look bored and wait for love to happen
Bonnie Heiland Laddie!

Were you ever in Hawaii
Where they dine on poi and Mahi-Mahi,
Do the hula and surf in a tsunami
Bonnie Heiland Laddie!

Were you ever stopped in Wales
Where the mighty Grey King pales
And the Once and Future King sets sail
Bonnie Heiland Laddie

Were you ever in Old Scotland
Where in Jane’s embrace, fair Tam-Lin pinned
Had forced the Fairy Queen to rescind
Bonnie Heiland Laddie

[Nephythys]

Originally Posted by Eliza Hodgkins 1812

Were you ever in Manhattan
Where the ladies in fur and satin
Look bored and wait for love to happen
Bonnie Heiland Laddie!

Were you ever in Hawaii
Where they dine on poi and Mahi-Mahi,
Do the hula and surf in a tsunami
Bonnie Heiland Laddie!

Were you ever stopped in Wales
Where the mighty Grey King pales
And the Once and Future King sets sail
Bonnie Heiland Laddie

Were you ever in Old Scotland
Where in Jane’s embrace, fair Tam-Lin pinned
Had forced the Fairy Queen to rescind
Bonnie Heiland Laddie

Thanks- more I can work with!

I KNEW you guys were up to this challenge. My group will love these!

Another muse- a member of our group did this one. same rythym and cadence- different type of verse-

When he turns up, he'll get quite a row
Me no good scoundrel of a husband, Joe
Took to sea a year ago
Bonny Heiland Laddy

and for further inspiration:

And what of that narsty dragon?
Who did appear when ye were braggin'
and drinking deep from yer flaggon!
Bonnie Heiland Laddie!