It's just nice

Cadaverous Pallor · 05-11-2005, 11:57 AM

There's something nice
about a hot afternoon
pumping gas across the street from
a car sales lot, flags
flapping crisply
window rolled down, head resting
smell of gasoline and the
heat
inside the greenhoused car
bus stop sign shudders to the sound
of trucks on their way
car door dings softly when you
open it to replace the nozzle
and it's hot, summer breathing
down your shirt
full
ready for the next errand
snap shut the gas cap
start up to blaring radio
drive into heat shimmer
and away.

lizziebith · 05-11-2005, 12:14 PM

Took me right there! Superbly expressed!

Cadaverous Pallor · 05-12-2005, 09:23 PM

Slight edit

Something Nice

There's something nice
about a hot afternoon
pumping gas across the street from
a car sales lot, flags
flapping crisply
window rolled down, head resting
smell of gasoline and the
heat
inside the greenhoused car
bus stop sign shudders to the sound
of trucks on their way
car door dings softly
replacing the nozzle
and it's hot, summer breathing
down your shirt
full
ready for the next errand
snap shut the gas cap
start up to blaring radio
drive into heat shimmer
and away

Prudence · 05-12-2005, 10:46 PM

Reminds me of the summer I learned to drive -- 76 Chevy Nova with red vinyl seats that left patterns on your thighs. Z-ROCK AM 1590 on the radio and I was Actually Pumping Gas and not because my dad was driving and wanted me to "learn." Groovy!

05-11-2005, 11:57 AM	#1
Cadaverous Pallor ohhhh baby Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Parental Bliss Posts: 12,364	It's just nice There's something nice about a hot afternoon pumping gas across the street from a car sales lot, flags flapping crisply window rolled down, head resting smell of gasoline and the heat inside the greenhoused car bus stop sign shudders to the sound of trucks on their way car door dings softly when you open it to replace the nozzle and it's hot, summer breathing down your shirt full ready for the next errand snap shut the gas cap start up to blaring radio drive into heat shimmer and away. __________________ The second star to the right shines in the night for you
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lizziebith Wishing these titles could be longe Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Pearblossom CA Posts: 984	Took me right there! Superbly expressed! __________________ $ DO \|\| !$ DO ; TRY TRY: COMMAND NOT FOUND
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05-12-2005, 09:23 PM	#3
Cadaverous Pallor ohhhh baby Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Parental Bliss Posts: 12,364	Slight edit Something Nice There's something nice about a hot afternoon pumping gas across the street from a car sales lot, flags flapping crisply window rolled down, head resting smell of gasoline and the heat inside the greenhoused car bus stop sign shudders to the sound of trucks on their way car door dings softly replacing the nozzle and it's hot, summer breathing down your shirt full ready for the next errand snap shut the gas cap start up to blaring radio drive into heat shimmer and away __________________ The second star to the right shines in the night for you Last edited by Cadaverous Pallor : 05-12-2005 at 09:26 PM. Reason: can't stop!
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05-12-2005, 10:46 PM	#4
Prudence Beelzeboobs, Esq. Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Gavel - I haz it Posts: 6,287	Reminds me of the summer I learned to drive -- 76 Chevy Nova with red vinyl seats that left patterns on your thighs. Z-ROCK AM 1590 on the radio and I was Actually Pumping Gas and not because my dad was driving and wanted me to "learn." Groovy! __________________ traguna macoities tracorum satis de
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