Vignette attempt.

[Prudence]

I loved it. My only comment would be that I want more sounds. And I don't know where exactly, or how, because I re-read it and there were sounds described. I guess when I picture Main Street in my mind -- and that in particular of all of the lands -- I don't just see it, I hear it.

[Cadaverous Pallor]

Originally Posted by Prudence

I loved it. My only comment would be that I want more sounds. And I don't know where exactly, or how, because I re-read it and there were sounds described. I guess when I picture Main Street in my mind -- and that in particular of all of the lands -- I don't just see it, I hear it.

It's funny you should mention this. My original attempt included this, regarding Main Street: Sweet music saunters through the air, familiar and comforting. I went through many versions of that thought and then decided to sit at Coke Corner with Rod playing....and realized that I didn't want to pick a song, because I wanted the mood to stay quiet and soothing. The bit I did put in about the music was my compromise between my urge to place him as a Rod fan but keep the tone low.

Thanks for the comment!