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Ghoulish Delight · 05-18-2010, 08:01 PM

Along the same lines, "yet" just further reinforces the initial thought of "cheap and crappy." I get where you're coming from with it, it sounds little too much like, "Nor, really, it's not sh*tty! Trust me! I know it sounds sh*tty, but I swear it's not sh*tty!"

Lead with the best attribute.

"Professional AND affordable design, all under one roof."

BarTopDancer · 05-18-2010, 08:35 PM

I like the concept but not digging the word "cheap" and I'm still not sure what you're selling (even though I know what you're selling).

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Originally Posted by Ghoulish Delight

"Professional AND affordable design, all under one roof."

This.

Cadaverous Pallor · 05-18-2010, 10:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ghoulish Delight

"Professional AND affordable design, all under one roof."

I'd change that to "Professional AND affordable design under one roof." Two things does not an "all" make.

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Ghoulish Delight I Floop the Pig Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Alternative Swankstyle Posts: 19,348	Along the same lines, "yet" just further reinforces the initial thought of "cheap and crappy." I get where you're coming from with it, it sounds little too much like, "Nor, really, it's not shtty! Trust me! I know it sounds shtty, but I swear it's not sh*tty!" Lead with the best attribute. "Professional AND affordable design, all under one roof." __________________ 'He who receives an idea from me, receives instruction himself without lessening mine; as he who lights his taper at mine, receives light without darkening me.' -TJ
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