Your opinion requested - Page 3

lashbear · 11-05-2010, 10:37 PM

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Originally Posted by Kevy Baby

those optical illusions where you can see more than thing (like below - one image mildly NSFW).

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Very Illuminating.

wendybeth · 11-06-2010, 12:22 AM

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Originally Posted by Cadaverous Pallor

I swear, the first thing I thought was "runny nose". It reminds me of those commercials for nasal decongestants or whatever where they show an animation of a see-through profile, demonstrating the product at work.

I have chronic sinusitis, and that's the first thing I thought- rhinitis.

Bornieo: Fully Loaded · 11-06-2010, 01:34 AM

I like the drip/bulb idea - not a fan of the colors or the font, imho. Alot of dead space.

Kevy Baby · 11-06-2010, 06:22 AM

Whereas I love the colors and open space.

I like the design!

Cadaverous Pallor · 11-06-2010, 01:16 PM

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Originally Posted by LSPoorEeyorick

Thanks for the helpful feedback.

How about... this? (The black area won't be as thick - that's bleed area.)

This, I dig. Love the lightbulb and three dimensional tap. The title helps a lot, too. There is a bit of dead space - I'd try extending the area horizontally and enlarge the lettering.

LSPoorEeyorick · 11-06-2010, 04:47 PM

I'd extend the area if it wasn't the front side of a business card.

But I'm glad to hear that the concept is coming across clearer in this version. It's hard to get something like that across! I really appreciate all of your feedback; it helped me arrive here.

Kudos to Tom for brainstorming with me, and tossing out the light bulb idea. I want to live in his Clever-Cleverland.

I understand about the open space - though I do like the fact that it's not crammed. I don't see it as "dead" so much as purposefully open.

My personal information will be on the back, as is the recent standard for Creative (capital C, meaning "hire me for my creativity") calling cards.

Bornieo: Fully Loaded · 11-06-2010, 07:43 PM

Have you considered merging the W's? Like the W in Powers with W in WaterWorks in a cross or + like pattern? ImHo. I think the deadspace would be lesser if the eyeline of the figure was even with the lettering. ImHo

Not Afraid · 11-07-2010, 12:42 AM

Since I'm late to the game, the first picture/thought was "She's a drip". But, does anyone call a person a drip anymore?

I get the picture now. The look of it reminds me of a Victorian silhouette which is not an era I usually associate with you. But, I like the look of it.

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11-06-2010, 01:34 AM	#23
Bornieo: Fully Loaded Lego Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Disneyland, USA Posts: 3,704	I like the drip/bulb idea - not a fan of the colors or the font, imho. Alot of dead space.
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11-06-2010, 06:22 AM	#24
Kevy Baby Chowder Head Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Yes Posts: 18,500	Whereas I love the colors and open space. I like the design! __________________ The thing about quotes on the internet is that you cannot verify their validity. - Abraham Lincoln
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11-06-2010, 04:47 PM	#26
LSPoorEeyorick scribblin' Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: in the moment Posts: 3,872	I'd extend the area if it wasn't the front side of a business card. But I'm glad to hear that the concept is coming across clearer in this version. It's hard to get something like that across! I really appreciate all of your feedback; it helped me arrive here. Kudos to Tom for brainstorming with me, and tossing out the light bulb idea. I want to live in his Clever-Cleverland. I understand about the open space - though I do like the fact that it's not crammed. I don't see it as "dead" so much as purposefully open. My personal information will be on the back, as is the recent standard for Creative (capital C, meaning "hire me for my creativity") calling cards.
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11-06-2010, 07:43 PM	#27
Bornieo: Fully Loaded Lego Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Disneyland, USA Posts: 3,704	Have you considered merging the W's? Like the W in Powers with W in WaterWorks in a cross or + like pattern? ImHo. I think the deadspace would be lesser if the eyeline of the figure was even with the lettering. ImHo
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11-07-2010, 12:42 AM	#28
Not Afraid HI! Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 17,108	Since I'm late to the game, the first picture/thought was "She's a drip". But, does anyone call a person a drip anymore? I get the picture now. The look of it reminds me of a Victorian silhouette which is not an era I usually associate with you. But, I like the look of it.
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