I really do suck at poetry...

[tracilicious]

Originally Posted by wendybeth

I have to recuse myself from critiquing, Traci- I can give the Vogon's a run for their money in the horrid poetry department.

That's ok, I'll take opinions if you've got em. Or not. I just had this rolling around in my head, so I figured I'd give it it's own space.

[wendybeth]

To me, the poem reads like lyrics to a melancholy song, and I like it very much.

[tracilicious]

Originally Posted by wendybeth

To me, the poem reads like lyrics to a melancholy song, and I like it very much.

Thanks! Hmmm...I'll have Michael start on the chords....