Dove Contest - Take 1 (Need Feedback ASAP!!)

[Disneyphile]

Ok, how about the line, "Enjoy a little luxury, everyday" as a solitary spoken line at the end?

Would it be best to speak them over the words, or remove that shot and just say it over the shower/tray scene (and lengthen that a couple seconds to compensate)?

Oh, and who has a good voice around here, a microphone, and a way to record a file and email it to me? (I know you people who have Skype can possibly manage!)