Dove Contest - Take 1 (Need Feedback ASAP!!)

[wendybeth]

Originally Posted by Gemini Cricket

Are Jenn and Greg going to be in the sequel?

Lol- I thought of that as well, but in a humorous way: The shower curtain is drawn and all that can be seen is a person's silhouette as they drizzle the soap onto a loofah sponge. As the person soaps up, a male voice says something like "Wow- this is great!" (in an Herbal Essence sort of way, borderline orgasmic). Then Jenn pokes her head in the shower, and your see a totally soaped up Greg looking startled and then guilty as she glares at him for using her stuff.


Let's not even go into the KB version.


(I love the VO- I think it's perfect! ).