A poem by BDK

BigDaddyKyle · 10-26-2005, 09:11 PM

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I have no words to say
I'm at a loss for words
for what you did today
has changed my whole life

It may be for the good
It may be for the bad
But all I know for sure
Is I'm with you tonight

Can you hold me close
Can you warm my soul
Can you love me for who I am

For I need to be loved
Like no other man
Like no one has been loved before

I need to be loved
And love back indeed
I have a love to love
Right now I make this decree

I will love who needs to be loved
and I will be loved by all indeed

Just because I'm me

Tell me what you think. (This is the first poem I have ever written. Just thought I'd give it a try!

Thanks,

BDK

Not Afraid · 10-26-2005, 09:37 PM

Fantastic! Keep it up, BDK!

Betty · 10-27-2005, 05:20 AM

BigDaddyKyle · 10-27-2005, 06:42 AM

Thank you! I will work on another today if I feel inspired.

BDK

Motorboat Cruiser · 10-27-2005, 08:16 AM

Nice job, BDK.

€uroMeinke · 10-27-2005, 08:38 AM

BDK - be sure to check out the "Open Mic" forum for your future contributions

BigDaddyKyle · 10-27-2005, 08:49 AM

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Originally Posted by €uroMeinke

BDK - be sure to check out the "Open Mic" forum for your future contributions

Gotcha!

10-26-2005, 09:11 PM	#1
BigDaddyKyle Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Trenton, GA Posts: 42	A poem by BDK Untitled I have no words to say I'm at a loss for words for what you did today has changed my whole life It may be for the good It may be for the bad But all I know for sure Is I'm with you tonight Can you hold me close Can you warm my soul Can you love me for who I am For I need to be loved Like no other man Like no one has been loved before I need to be loved And love back indeed I have a love to love Right now I make this decree I will love who needs to be loved and I will be loved by all indeed Just because I'm me Tell me what you think. (This is the first poem I have ever written. Just thought I'd give it a try! Thanks, BDK __________________ Its me, Its me! It that K-Y-L-E!
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10-26-2005, 09:37 PM	#2
Not Afraid HI! Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 17,108	Fantastic! Keep it up, BDK!
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10-27-2005, 05:20 AM	#3
Betty Kicking up my heels! Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: The Silver State Posts: 3,783
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10-27-2005, 06:42 AM	#4
BigDaddyKyle Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Trenton, GA Posts: 42	Thank you! I will work on another today if I feel inspired. BDK __________________ Its me, Its me! It that K-Y-L-E!
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Motorboat Cruiser Cruiser of Motorboats Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: So Cal Posts: 3,665	Nice job, BDK.
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10-27-2005, 08:38 AM	#6
€uroMeinke L'Hédoniste Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: A.S.C.O.T. Posts: 8,671	BDK - be sure to check out the "Open Mic" forum for your future contributions __________________ I would believe only in a God that knows how to Dance. Friedrich Nietzsche
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