Better

blueerica · 01-27-2005, 09:01 PM

Sitting quietly
in a crowd of busy people
conversing with one another
I, with myself,
feeling very alone,
am dreaming of something better.
Better is for another day.

Gemini Cricket · 01-27-2005, 09:08 PM

It somehow goes nicely with your avatar. It must be the dreamy gaze upwards...

Good stuff.

blueerica · 01-28-2005, 07:36 AM

Never thought of it that way, GC...

Nice observation, Thanks.

Eliza Hodgkins 1812 · 01-28-2005, 01:49 PM

Ooh, I agree with GC

I really like the "I, with myself" to illustrate that you emphasize the notion that you can be in good company on your own, but still feel lonely. If that makes sense. Uh, yeah.

Simple and sweet, chica.

lindyhop · 01-29-2005, 10:08 PM

I like.

I've been there.

Thanks.

01-27-2005, 09:01 PM	#1
blueerica Nueve Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 6,497	Better Sitting quietly in a crowd of busy people conversing with one another I, with myself, feeling very alone, am dreaming of something better. Better is for another day.
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01-27-2005, 09:08 PM	#2
Gemini Cricket ... Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 13,244	It somehow goes nicely with your avatar. It must be the dreamy gaze upwards... Good stuff.
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01-28-2005, 07:36 AM	#3
blueerica Nueve Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 6,497	Never thought of it that way, GC... Nice observation, Thanks.
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01-28-2005, 01:49 PM	#4
Eliza Hodgkins 1812 Sputnik Sweetheart Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Long Beach Posts: 2,685	Ooh, I agree with GC I really like the "I, with myself" to illustrate that you emphasize the notion that you can be in good company on your own, but still feel lonely. If that makes sense. Uh, yeah. Simple and sweet, chica.
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01-29-2005, 10:08 PM	#5
lindyhop Swing Swank Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Long Beach Posts: 997	I like. I've been there. Thanks.
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