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Or that old dude from the diabetes commercials that can't say diabetes.
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The 3rd one is great! My two things are the product getting sucked back into the bottle and I am really distracted by the movement in the end. The level of fog isn't to much, or to little but the movement is to much.
If you guys don't mind I can show it to a few marketing peoples in my office tomorrow for a fresh perspective. |
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Honestly? Submit all 3. I like them all for various reasons. Although I agree, take those extra "sucking" frames out of take 3 first. Maybe give the extra moments to your initial titles.
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I have fixed the bottle suckage, and switched back to the second steamy shower. I'm also toying with their stock music right now. It's SO overplayed from all the entries, but it is theirs.... (Thanks to everyone for all your insight and patience. I feel so, "Mom!! Look at me, Mom!! Look at this! Look at this!", which I know can be quite annoying. ![]() |
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Just my opinion but I think the "other" music clip works better for the piece than mine. Now, I'll go back and actually pay attention to the images.
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I liked take 2 and take 1. I was really taken with 2, however. Loved the fogged mirror. liked the music of 1, alot
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One little thing I like about Take 3 that is different from the first two.
At the end, with the text: Enjoy a little luxury, everyday <<Dove bottle>> dovecreamoil.com Your titles are exactly aligned and over the "Dove" label on the body wash bottle. I'm reading the text of the first line and it blends to the bottle and immediately, with no eye movement at all I'm reading the brand name, and then without eye movement I am reading the action prompt (dovecreamoil.com). In the other takes they are close but not really aligned. |
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I, um, looked at the camera when it was being unloaded...
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